The Mercenary Commander's Daughter

Writing novels sure is difficult, isn't it? Writing prose is really challenging. I was inspired by various works and got the urge to write a yuri novel, and things went well at first. But starting with unfamiliar computer operations, I struggled to come up with a story, and when I tried to put my ideas into words, I only realized my lack of vocabulary, writing ability, and knowledge... In the end, I couldn't write even a fragment of a yuri novel. However, since I've gone through the trouble of writing something, I'd like someone to read it. Content-wise, it's planned to be a story about the protagonist Sera, the daughter of a mercenary company commander, and her sister whom she was separated from in childhood... I sincerely appreciate your support.