World Revolution After Being Reborn in Another World

One day, Amemiya Hikari (the protagonist) is suddenly told to go to another world and save it. As a reincarnate, she heads to a world of swords and magic. Amemiya, who had many regrets in her previous life, struggles in her second life to avoid repeating the same mistakes. And in the process, she may or may not save the world... This is a serialized novel, but it's my first submission. Since I'm writing a novel for the first time, I expect the plot to be weak and there to be many grammatical errors and typos. I'd be happy if you could point out various things in your feedback. (Since I'm sensitive to criticism, please be gentle with me... I'm asking nicely) For now, the revision is complete. The sections marked with ★ are on hold for the time being.